Eccentric Flower talk:201003/The Tag

Iain:

Yes. Yes, that is slightly creepy.

-- 07:07, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Rhonda:

I like it.

-- 08:56, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Ursula:

Interesting. Write some more.

Maybe it's just from living in advertising-saturated LA, but the part at the end made me think of some sort of viral campaign involving some new form of skywriting. I know, it's meant to be something more vague and sinister than that. But we have the sides of entire skyscrapers given over to ads here, and Blade Runner-style video billboards all over, so colorful letters in the sky aren't that much of a stretch.

-- 09:41, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Ysabel:

Nicely done.

-- 16:26, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Danima:

This is one of my favorite holidays, and I wish it could come every year.

-- 16:50, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Columbina:

I know, it's meant to be something more vague and sinister than that.

Maybe. Maybe not.

so colorful letters in the sky aren't that much of a stretch.

No, they're not, really, and I think that may be the most sinister concept here.

-- 17:18, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Jweader:

Very nice.

For some reason, it had me thinking just a little bit of A Young Lady's Illustrated Primer.

-- 17:49, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Andy:

Nice.

-- 19:32, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Joy:

Definitely registered as sinister to me. Shiver down my back.

Dammit, I want to know more!

(I just want you to know that this is coming from someone who almost universally hates short stories.)

-- 20:26, 2 March 2010 (GMT)

Settsimaksimin:

yum!

-- 19:05, 3 March 2010 (GMT)